EXAMPLE ADS/PROFILES
VERY ORDINARY: I'm a fun loving, 5ft, 8 teacher with long
brown hair and brown eyes, I have a pleasant appearance and am willing
to try just about anything...as long as its fun. I'm looking for a tall,
man in good health who has great smile and loves to laugh. I'm a loyal
and loving lady, who with the right man can be sharing, giving and
compassionate.
BETTER: Well, I've been accused on an occasion or two of being
a workaholic; but, really, keeping balance between the personal and
professional sides of my life has always been very important to me.
Whenever possible, I like to catch a movie or two (okay, I'm a movie
nut! Did you get the ''Matrix'' reference from my headline.), take a
dance class (ballet and ballroom dancing are passions for me), or get
outside to hit a few tennis balls. I'm not really fully taking advantage
of all this area has to offer culturally (theatre, foreign films, good
food, etc.) and I look forward to making the time to experience it all.
As much fun as all these activities are, they'd be even more enjoyable
if I could share the time with that special someone who had interests in
common with mine.
BETTER: I m always smiling but I'm a little bit shy. I like to
be sexy but with a little bit of class. I like to learn about different
cultures and traditions from other countries that people have. I like to
try new things and meet new people either for a friendship or something
very special. I can be a little bit funny sometimes. I don't like games.
I'm very forward for what I want and say. I'm a very nice to everyone
but in a intelligent way. My favorite thing to do is dancing, I been
dancing since I was 6years old(Modern dance). I prefer to dance techno
or trance. My favorite (Lasgo), but I do dance to other music.
GOOD: Now You've done it you browsed me, your gonna have to
finish the job and write. I'm extremely easy going, takes a lot to
ruffle my feathers. I like meeting new people and love when that
happens. I enjoy all types of music and always want to learn more. I'm
not afraid to admit when I'm wrong! I also enjoy writing when I get
inspired. My writings can be found here www.web--- to but you have to
contact me here. There is no contact info on my writing pages. If you
like what you read, write me.
VERY GOOD: Anyone got a roadmap for life... Unfortunately I
have no X to mark the spot on my life's map9 ..Looking for few new
directions for any journeys. Searching for something a bit brighter than
the cobwebs that are closing in daily!
Share an idea.. Got a extra map. Got spare directions.,, Wanna share a
road trip memory] How about ya just wanna give a shout out. : I'm
friendly, honest, straight forward, patient and believe in the golden
rule of life. I'm no waif girl nor an obese slob, I like to share a
smile and joke to brighten a dreary day.: hmmm enough about me.. what
about you (question mark)!,,,, I forget how to get out of here, hmmmmm...
was it ''click my heels 3 times '' or the ''drink me'' bottle....not
into married men flings, send a pic since I'm sharing mine upfront..
Girls welcome to also drop me a line
VERY GOOD: Don't you hate when your clicking thorough profiles
and people have nothing to say, or something bland, like; ''I'm sweet,
sexy and your kinda guy/gal''
WELL LOOK NO FURTHER!
I will try to avoid this. For both our sakes.
hmmm, what do I like. picnics, carrying beer in my bag, wine in a water
bottle, loads of chunky silver jewelry, Russian literature, hiding in
the forest, dancing to Latin grooves, live music, traveling, making
animal noises, painting, puppet making?? sculpting and politics.
On side note for those vegans and nazi veggies out there, fish don't
have feelings!!! That includes shrimp.
I like garlic, zucchini, eggplant, roasted red peppers, brussel sprouts,
calamari. oh and spicy MUSTARD
I have a very serious side which most aren't aware of. I'm a book
junkie and a library fanatic. I love to study and am very organized,
only when it come to academics. My room is a style but my books are
color coordinated, underlined and topically highlighted. ha.....LOSER.
I am a difficult person. Or just complicated. My overall goals are
simplistic, but the way I go about achieving them are a tad off beat.
Dating service sites often allow you 500 or more words for your message.
Put on your thinking cap and use them ALL!
# # #
Those who write just a trite line or two reveal just how boring they
must be. You will see these short, uninteresting messages by the
hundreds as you browse listings. I'll bet you'll zoom by them just like
everyone else does.
If you were selling cars would your ad read "Nice car with four wheels
and two headlights"? If you did you would be out of business before the
end of the week.
"I am a nice man with a sense of humor looking for gorgeous woman with
same." Would any woman in her right mind waste time contacting that
lump?
Research seems to show men who get the most responses are…
Older
and Taller
Financially secure and successful
Interested in expensive things, such as theater, skiing or traveling
Convey a subtle masculinity in their ads of ruggedness, confidence and
strength… without overt sexual language.
You've got to sell yourself baby, just like they sell stuff in those TV
commercials. If you aren't willing to spend the time it takes to write a
clever, attention getting ad I suggest you forget dating and buy a
goldfish!
> A relationship is what happens between two
people who are waiting for something better to come along.
THE KILLER HEADLINE
You have about 10 words in a headline to stop the world and compel it to
read your personal ad or profile.
Dear reader, that headline has to grab them hard and give them a good
shake if you expect your ad to produce love and everlasting happiness.
It is one among many and it is perhaps the most important one line you
will ever write. You only have one chance to make a first impression and
this is it!
Carefully read all of the headlines others have written in your
category. Now that you are familiar with your competition start working
to beat it!
Research has shown that the best headlines usually ask a question. Ask
an intriguing question that readers will be compelled to answer or in
some other way draws the reader into a clicking on your ad.
The same old, same old. That's the type of headline you find in many
categories. Once you know what most others are writing in your category
you can catch everyone's attention with something completely different.
Men should spend a few minutes browsing through the men's ads and read
the headlines that are competing for attention. Women should do the
same. This will give you an idea of how to make your headline scream out
for attention - head and shoulders above the rest!
We took a quick cruise through "Woman Looking For Man" on one dating
club site and spotted these good, attention-getting headlines.
Dance like no one is watching - Love like...
Treat me like an angel and I'll take you to heaven
Don't hold my hand of you're gonna break my heart
Help me make my Mom happy
Drive me to distraction… or anywhere romantic
Groovy grandma seeks hip grandpa
Come out and play
My sister thinks I'm great
2Hot2Handle, but if your careful you won't get burned
Psst...Over Here...That's Right...I'm looking at You...Baby!
Grip & Rip Or Wine & Dine
A Wild Child Who Writes Erotic Stories
I can change my own tires!
Looking for a wild time? Well here I am!
Earth-bound Angel seeking heaven on earth!
Looking for someone who can take it and dish it out
Football every Saturday and Sunday....woo-hoo....I love it...
If you need love I'll be right there
Indiana Pixie Princess seek hot, handy man
With just a little effort you can write a real winner that will get you
noticed!
> What's the fastest way to a man's heart?
Through his chest with a sharp knife.
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